As a writer, I never know where inspiration will come from or where it will lead. I feel I must be open to it and respond. Sometimes those responses go in a strange, unknown direction.
The poem I am sharing today originated from two different prompts. The first was from Poets and Writers weekly email writing prompt, The Time is Now. The poetry prompt led me to this article about a fashion exhibit on Mars at the Metropolitan Museum of Art. From the article, I collected unusual phrases like “the shape of a doll’s dress” and “nonverbal, abstract images inside of me.” The article was written about unusual fashion design; however, the words became organic and drew me in. My collection grew.
I didn’t know what I was going to do with this collection of lines. The Poets and Writers prompt instructed me to start with one of Leanne Shapton’s lines and let my imagination take over.
A few days later I read a prompt in The Practice of Poetry. This prompt asked me to use someone else’s words interspersed with my own in a “collaborate cut-up” poem. I didn’t literally cut-up the article, but now I had a way to use my collection of lines. The combination of writing exercises took me into a direction I didn’t manipulate or expect. Don’t you love it when that happens?
Blissful Containment
Pull a sweater over your head
in the dark and the dark gets darker.
Towel over your shoulders
adds warmth and a sense of caring.
This feels prenatal–like a cocoon.
Certainly, you will survive the tornado.Croquembouche of exposure and erasure
embraces your delicate sweetness.
With a pillowcase
to hold all your precious jewels,
You will be saved
in an A-line skirt with a Peter Pan collar.We are all organic and alive,
reactive like the center of the earth.
The beginning of softness
enters with our belly breaths.
Palettes of mud
feed our drying souls.Our earth mother knows us well
nurturing our natural and childlike shapes.
Her transmission of spirit
sneezes us into existence.
We won’t remember.
We don’t have to.–Margaret Simon (with lines from Leanne Shapton’s “Rei Kawakubo, Interpreter of Dreams”)
Wow. I love how you collected inspiration from a variety of different sources! The end result is both stunning and soothing. I am refreshed after reading.
I love this “collaborate cut-up” idea. A great way to intermingle your thoughts with that of someone else and come up with a powerful piece of writing. You are so right, we never know where inspiration will come from of where it will lead.
The outcome of this process is stunning. But even more impressive is the process and its effect on you as a writer.
I can’t wait to try this. Just a few more items to grade and then I’m going to test this out! Thanks!
I hope you share your results. It could work with any selection of text, but this one was quite compelling to me.
I am going to have to try this, Margaret – I’ll be on the hunt for the right text, too.
I just spent some time on The Time is Now website. Wow, some great stuff on there. I love what you have done, and I am sure this was not easy. Having the right text, I think, would be the key to success. My favorite line is “Palettes of mud feed our drying souls.”
A funny thing about this line: In my journal I wrote feed our crying souls but made a typo in typing it. This is an example of the universe working to help create this poem.
Margaret, the last stanza resonated with me. I have to say this post was exciting as you brought me into a new experience as you shared your process. I am looking forward to trying this strategy out. Thanks so much for continuing to grow and share as a poet.
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